With all the weeks I have been planning and animating the dragon, I have finally concluded to what my final attempt will be like, it may be a bit basic but I think its brilliant for my first animation without help.
I like the way that the dragon is the only thing in colour so it makes us focus mostly on the dragon that is the main part of the story. I like how the animation is nice and simple. what I think you could improve on in this story is you could of added text or sound to make it a bit more interesting so then we can know why the dragon is burning a village. you could have also spent a bit more time on the drawings for a more effective look. but I do think that the simple drawings look good and the way the dragon flies adds a comical aspect to it
I really like your animation, the way the dragon changes size as it flies in/out is really good and give the impression of depth and distance. The animation could be more complicated though and maybe instead of using just one image of the dragon maybe three or four would be better and give a smoother and more visually entertaining animation. You could also develop the plot more and make the animation longer al well as adding some interactivity.
I like the way that the dragon is the only thing in colour so it makes us focus mostly on the dragon that is the main part of the story. I like how the animation is nice and simple.
ReplyDeletewhat I think you could improve on in this story is you could of added text or sound to make it a bit more interesting so then we can know why the dragon is burning a village. you could have also spent a bit more time on the drawings for a more effective look. but I do think that the simple drawings look good and the way the dragon flies adds a comical aspect to it
I really like your animation, the way the dragon changes size as it flies in/out is really good and give the impression of depth and distance. The animation could be more complicated though and maybe instead of using just one image of the dragon maybe three or four would be better and give a smoother and more visually entertaining animation. You could also develop the plot more and make the animation longer al well as adding some interactivity.
ReplyDelete